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I just finished Lyell's route and this game is .so good, I enjoyed it so much

Like the plot is just amazing, it's just on spot, the art looks amazing and I literally have no complaints

When I'm old enough to be able to support it, I totally will, so really just thank you so much <3333

- Sincerally, a lesbian girl

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This was really good and I enjoyed it immensely!

There's some spelling mistakes, wrongly named text boxes, one or two places were the passing seems off and misplaced spirits but that's really the only issues I'd say there are! I can really tell how hard the developer has worked on this. I can't wait to see what the updates hold. 

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Honestly the best game ever. Keep up the good work! Reccomend to all who love the supernatural and lesbians


Awsome game, thanks!

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I feel like Blake likes Jaylene which makes me sad cuz she's literally the first one I kinda wanted Jaylene to be with but she's not an option : (

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she will be a route, just gotta wait for the update :D

Yo I ran this game through virus total and it said it had a Trojan in it.

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it does have a Trojan in it, it turns your computer gay, watch out.

That explains a lot

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Howdy ^~^ Enjoyed your game. The arts pretty neat and I liked the characters a lot. Only thing I found a bit irking (not trying to be a meanie but) was the typos and grammatical errors here and there kind of broke the immersion a tad bit. Speaking of which, I was wondering whether you require an editor in which case I offer my assistance :^) 

I would appractiate the help. jut dm me @ llonelly2 on twitter

Righto and thanks ^-^

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Hey! I loved your game, and I didn't even fully finish two of the three available routes yet! I can tell you work really hard to make it as good as possible. I can't wait for Xanthe's route since she's my favorite! Sadly, I didn't think of screenshotting the few errors I might have seen, but I remembered that there was some confusion between your and you're most of the time. Except for grammar mistakes, I don't think I saw that many graphic ones. Sometimes, the names of the characters weren't showing when they were talking. Once I go back to playing, I'll make sure to screen as much typos as possible!


Thanks for this game!

thank you so much, screenshotting it will be so helpful since it has about 500 pages worth of words so its hard to catch typos. and I'm glad you're enjoying the game!

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Hi! idk if this is a typo or an error in my download, but for some reason my game says that it is the 1.0 version.  For now I have only finished Lyell's route (which was adorable) and I am half way throug Bae's, but seen the version discrepancy has made me believe that maybe I am missing out on your improvements for this amazing  game. If this is some user error, I would love to know what I did wrong.  

Thank you for responding when you got the time!

this is merely something itch does. I don't change the version name cause if I do then it replaces the file I already put there, losing all the stats it had, which I want to keep. changing the file name to version 2 or something similar will replace it fully, losing all the previous stats on those files. hopefully, I explained that in the most understandable way. if you download from this page then you are up to date on the game. the newest version will be coming soon ( but delayed due to voice acting lines not coming in) so I may just bite the bullet and replace the original files so there won't be any confusion

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Thank you for your explanation! I don't think changing the name is worth it, if it means losing your stats. Probably a little note in the description about this small nuisance would suffice.  

I wouldn't worry too much, its probably just a me problem. I think what confused me was that it also said it was the 1.0 ver on the  "About" section in the menu. 

Thank you for replying so quickly,  I will finish the rest of the routes without worries tonigth.  And patiently wait for the new update.

Once again thank you for your work!

I don’t remember the exact moment, I think it’s when Sierra and Lexi are fighting over Sierra dying lexi’s clothes all pink, I noticed one of the times when it was Lexi talking it said Lyell in the name part instead of Lexi. Not a big deal but thought you might want to know! I absolutely love the game! It’s amazing thank you for making this.

thanks for letting me know! And thank you!

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you’re welcome! 

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Is Sierra gonna ever be a romantic option? She my baby <3

Also love the game !!

lol,  I don't think so sadly but I'm glad you like her! and thank you!

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Finished the game and got the available endings including the bad ones.  Can't wait for the other route's to be done so i can experience it all over again. There are a couple of weird glitches where characters that are not around is talking like Lyell speaking instead of Jaylene. but overall love the game and looking forward to Xanthe's route. 

Thank you, I'm really happy you enjoyed it, and thanks for notifying me of the glich. also love your icon

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I finished all the available routes and i must say i really enjoy the game so far! I can't wait for blake's route to be added and for xanthe's to be completed too.  Arnd when would the next update be?

I polished lyells,Baes.Victorias routes(Their stories have changed alot from the original) so their completly done. I'm working on the  images for xanthes liens and blakes which takes about a day to do for each route. I also want to work on other things to my likening. theres no set date but I feel this month is a good estimate for the next update.

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Ah thanks for replying! I can't wait to see how the story goes.

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What's the music that plays whenever there's conflict?  I really like it and wanted to learn it on my guitar and was wondering if you had sheet music or tabs for it

All I can give you is the song name, which is Riding Solo by David Fesliyan. I got it from here https://www.fesliyanstudios.com/royalty-free-music/download/riding-solo/360. sheetmusic or tabs for this song i don't think exist :( but you can look and see

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Thank you so much!!!  Also, the game is great and I absolutely love it!  Looking forward to when it's finished! :)

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is this game still in the works ? 

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Yes it is, don’t worry an update is coming soon

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I downloaded this game yesterday and already finished all the routes included at the time, gotta say i was a little disappointed that Blake wasn't one of them but whatever, i'm in love with Lyell now <3

Just a note, I noticed some typos and such but also that sometimes the name of the character that is talking switches to another one's which can be a little confusing, more in Victoria's route than the others. 

Still loved it tho, i'm looking forward to play it whenever it's completed, maybe because of Lien cause she's hot.  Pun intended.

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Thank you! glad you enoyed the game :)

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Just downloaded the game, played for an hour and I just gotta say I was massively disappointed Sierra, Blake and Lexi are not part of the sweethearts list  TT_TT I was actually pretty into Sierra, she got such a cute personality, but my second choice is Victoria, so not all is lost! 

I do quite often noticed typos, nothing huge, but lowercasing name instead of uppercasing is not uncommon. But this game is free, still developing and it's definitely worth a try.

Is there or well A way i can download 2.0 i believe with lien, xanthe routes because i got finished with Lyell which i made it a bad ending and i got sad ANYWAYS and i did Vic's which was cute

if you download the latest files from the page you have the latest version. liens and xanthes arn't done yet so they are not going to be in any download at this current time.

omG dUDe ThAnk you bruv <3

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i downloaded this game yesterday and finished all the routes! the game is GREAT, really i loved it :) i just finished victoria's route, to be honest i was scared to do her route because of all the comments saying that her route is the most terrifying, but somehow i got the good ending and it was SO CUTE i love victoria shes a total sweetheart ): first route i did was lyell's route i dont even know how and when did i end up on her route cause i dont like butch girls that much, but she was a total cutie and her route was sooo cute and calm. i think my favs are xanthe and vic, i've always had a thing for femmes and i really liked how victoria changed and grew to understand her mistakes. i cant wait for full xanthe route cause it seems like there's a complicated story, domestic abuse maybe?? not really sure. i loved how every character has their own story and problems, the side characters are also awesome (blake route when????), the plot is really great and this is so much more than a dating sim (but also thank you, casue there arent  a lot of good lesbian dating sims, so this is a blessing) i hope you won't give up on this game and keep up the good work! 

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Aww thank you so much! this was so nice to read .I'm really happy you enjoyed the game.

An don't worry I havent given up on this game. xanthe, liens and blakes route have all been written and just need to add the images to them :) (among other things). It shouldn't be too long till the next update.

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thanks for the reply! im really looking forward to this

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I loved this game! there was a glitch at the ending (?) of liens route but i just assumed it was because it wasnt finished. I love the art syle and the characters and im ecited for updates on the characters!

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it :)

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Hey does quick question does anyone know how to get the xanthe route which may sound stupid but i have been trying for a while and its like..........the only route i havent gotten also if the creator does happen to look at this i really enjoy the game [As it is not easy to find good queer games really]  hope you make more stuff like this in the future.

Hey I’m glad your liking the game and yes I’m definitely doing more games like this after I finish this one.  

I’m not at my computer right now so I can’t tell you exactly what they are but here’s a hint I gave another commenter hopefully you’ll be able to tell what the numbers correlate to

xanthes-1,1,2,3,3,3

thanks for the help hope you have a nice day

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Will be interesting to see the full game. :)

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This feels very nice and 'snug' in a way. I definitely would like to play the Xanthe and Liens routes! How long might they take to update?

Also, would definitely also like to see a Blake route! Hopefully you don't abandon this project! :D 

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well, when I update it with Xanthe and liens(and Blakes) route  I  plan on it having other major updates as well. Vic and bae basically have different stories now(Lyell stayed the same with just a few adjustments). In addition I'm giving it new UI, a way to track which endings you got, a way for you to interact with objects in the scene and a lot more. I'm also implementing voice acting(just the common route since i don't have enough money to pay the actors to do more) will also take time to do. furthermore, I'm working on my final for my programming class which will take my time away from this sadly. So I don't have set date for when it will update, but hopefully in the next coming months. 

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Thanks for the reply! Will definitely be waiting to see where this all unfolds! ( So much potential! )

Good luck with your finals! ^ ( ^ . ^ ) ^

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I've played through almost all the routes (currently halfway through Lien's)  and I love this game! It's so charming and sweet! But for some reason I'm having a bug where I can't finish Victoria's without getting the bad end? I got stuck on the left/right segment, and no matter what I always get the bad end, I even took a photo of the directions she gives you bc I knew I'd need it later, I followed it, refollowed it, and refollowed it again to make sure I didn't make a mistake and I still get the bad end, idk if I'm just doing it wrong though :(

I have a few critiques and suggestions too if you don't mind;

I really like the art style but some things about it seem off, the first thing off the top of my head is that their chests are too high up on the body, and the poses can seem awkward at times.

I have such a bias for Lyell, but I also really like Blake and a route for her would be so cool! 

There seems to be quite a few typos, and the sentence structure can be weird sometimes, like not grammatically incorrect but just unnatural

Obviously idk your budget but I think voice acting would be a really cool addition, not necessary though, just something cool.

anyway I really love your game and keep up the good work!! :))

on your victoria route problem, Jaylene says she took the first left so you don't choose left as your first option that's probably why you're stuck on it. (later in the game you follow the directions again but Jaylene didn't say she took the first left so your first option would be left) hopefully, i explained that well(also depends on your version but if you have the latest it should work). and I've been working on getting voice acting in the game but only for Jaylene and the love interests since the budget is like four happy meals lol. I'm glad you liked the game and thanks for the feedback!

I was stuck on that part too. But then, When I'm getting bored to remember the route, I keep clicking left and that is how i was able to pass that loophole. I'm sure It was a bug

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I love Blake's personality, and I'm kinda sad I can't romance her. (YET!?)

Bae's probably my favorite. The pacing on her route just feels really good. 

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I love this game already! There are some typos, and I really wish Xanthe and Lien's routes were done, but seeing as Lyell is already my favourite I'm not too upset about that. I do lowkey wish Blake had a route too, but I'm sure when Xanthe and Lien are available I'll be too spoiled for choice to mind. Keep up the good work!

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Aww thank you so much! glad you liked the game, lyell is my favorite too( and who knows, maybe blake is getting a route in the next update)

hey the sprites completely dip from the game sometimes, not trying to sound whiney just wondering if you knew why, i'm on windows.

also liens name switches to lyell XD

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If you’re  on  xanthes or Liens route those have yet to be finished, The final version isn’t out yet. But let me know if your not on those routes.

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This is by far the best game I've played in forever, i can't wait for an update someday to this

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This game is absolutely beautiful!!!

I've gotta admit that it took me two hours to find out how to have Xanthe 's route, but it was worth it while it lasted!

I can't wait for the next update to come out!!

Keep up the good work :

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So I've tried picking the meanest answers like you suggested to get Xanthe or Lien's route but I still can't unlock them do you have any hints you can give because I cannot figure this out at all

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I wont say what the answers are outright but I can give hints . what the numbers correlate to is up to you to decide.

xanthes-112333

liens-332132

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Great game. 

i like the artstyle, especially the sprites.  i'd be great fot game to have more sprites for each character and more backgrounds. and existing BGs could need impovements too.

interesting and very different styles and personalities. seriously, each of them is unique. and interesting.., and with super-secret monster indentity. 

good plot... AND dating! a lot of funny moments :D 

For bugs... Found typo: "brain cell" not "brian cell" (in the 1st meeting with 5 girls and sheriff). You sometimes forgot to start the name with capital letter and to put dots between two sentences. Also "You're" not "your".  Some of the fonts at the begenning of the game doesn't show properly (some parts of text are replaced with empty squares). Sometimes there is wrong name above textbox or no name at all when someone  says something. 

spoliers

Each route shows different aspects of Jay's live. And of her friends' lives, too. 

On my first play-thru I don't how but I ended with Bae. Swimmy girl. And I wasn't even interested in her that much. Too sporty for me xD.  But I still like her. Cutest fish

ok, now I know which choice determinates who I date.

Victoria was the 2nd.  The Party Girl. The popular and annoying party girl. But she has the warmer side too.. Damn she has the scarriest and the most unexcepted monster form. and the scariest and the hardest route

Does all the routes have bad ends? Some of these are terrifying... 

It's time for Lyell. I prefer femme girls but... I always liked werewolfs! She's total "tomboy" and her blushing is cute... And her route is very... calming. well, Most of it...

i didn't even started the rest of routes. i'll wait till you finish them

Her roommates are so funny. Sierra is my fav! The cutest girl in the whole city... but already taken? And Blake! She is very laid-back and nice and always helps her friends. 

The Town of is very original too... About 50 people... most of them are ladies and most of these ladies are gay... and 50 % of this gay girls are wide-shoulder tomboys. hmmmm. Maybe the few of the sprites were created for male characters(?) . And at least half of the people in  the city are supernatural. Wow! Very interesting lore.

I'm very excited and waiting for the rest of the game.

edit: Memes! I understood that reference!

Thanks for the feedback it’s so helpful plus it’s also great to see other people’s opinions on the game. And I’m glad Sierra is your favorite!(I thought most people would dislike her lol). And wide shouldered tomboys are just my type, though I made sure femmes are present. overall I’m really happy you liked it! Thanks for the commenting I loved reading through it.(and I’m glad you got the references my biggest fear is people not getting my memes)

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I just played the Victoria route because of the ties they have from the past. I liked the most (although it ended badly because I was a jerk at the beginning with her...) and although I am halfway through the rest of romances (I always have bad endings) just because of her childhood story that I think is very important I think she is my favorite and I feel weird when it's not mention when I romance another characters or not alluded to like is a big deal tbh. Well with her I think I've found out that if I'm a jerk at some point it costs me my life hahaha (but i love being a cold bastard)

I’m glad she’s your favorite!(all of them are my favorite though I do have a bias towards Lyell). In the update she’s going to have a extended bad ending, have CGS and have them interact more in her route in general give it more bulk. So I hope you stick around for that. But thank you for playing and enjoying.

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Oh, don't get me wrong i love all of them (even if they kill me) but i'm a sucker for past drama and i wanted to know more about Jaylene but i kinda reconize that the others characters have more ~moments (a lot more)~  y'know but i find their story really important and part of Jaylene personality... even if Victoria swift from green to red...and i don't know i feel more implicate (that make me be a jerk to her at first) and with Lyell i feel kinda weak and vulnerable like i depend on her but she is cute and interesting so i love her (also i love the housemate too and i miss them)... and Bae was my unexpected romance so i was like girl why are you interacting so much with me? what about the rest ??? what's your deal with the fish thing Jaylene?? and really late i find out that i somehow started a romance with her so... yeah bad ending hit me real hard with her i was like WHAT?!?! WHAT DID I DO WRONG?????? so Victoria was more easy to understand why even if the whole father thing his 'job' was....  like they just throw me a bomb and so '?????... !!!!' but it was unexpected and i like that... i don't know.

I just love this and yes i'll stick around. Thanks for this it look like a lot of work so i appreciate this interesting game.

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If you want to know more about Jaylene the. Xanthes and liens routes would be great for you(Xanthe is more about her heart disease she had and liens is like her backstory). The update is gonna have theres finishes but probably gonna take longer since I’m going to fix stuff in the other routes. I thought some people might find the roommates annoying so I made Lyell so they could avoid them for one Route. And I didn’t realize how hard I apparently made it lol I thought getting the bad ends would be hard. and it makes me happy you like I worked a long time i this.

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I played the game for my YouTube channel. It's interesting! Big cast of characters.

Thank you for even playing! this makes me so happy :), cant wait for the next part!

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I played Victoria's route and I got one of the not so great endings and the only thing in my mind was "why you gotta be like that?" Like honestly I didn't expect her to go from Green to red, I guess that's what I get for being a twat.

Besides that I played all the routes and I really enjoyed them especially bae's she's a innocent cinnamon roll in need of protection.

im really happy you enjoyed it! and yes Bae is too sweet for this world  (^・ω・^ )

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is it just me but when downloading the 3.0 version the file says 1.0? other than that I'm just getting into this game and am highly enticed x3.

Renpy  (The thing i used to make the game) calls every version you create version 1. I  just downloaded it from the game page and it has all the updates that should be in version 3. 

Its that way since itch only replaces the old versions if the file name is the same, otherwise you'll have to delete the old files manually, losing all the stats on the old files and i want to keep those stats (hopefully all that makes sense)

and I'm happy you're liking it so far :D

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ah that makes so much sense! and I am. I just finished bae's route after starting it without knowing XD and oh my lord it was super freaking cute. >w<

that makes me so happy to hear :3 hope you enjoy the other routes as well.

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I'm sure I will, though if lien and xanthe are finished I dunno how to start them XD

oh no, they are currently  unfinished . you can still play them though, they just dont have a ending yet. i plan to release version 4 next Saturday with xanthes and liens routes done along with improved sprites and backgrounds.

to get their routes you have to answer all the questions at the beginning correctly, i wont say which ones are correct but go for the meanest answer possible to get their routes. I did the math and its like a 30 percent chance of getting it so it might take a while lol.

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ok but Blake rotue when

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Yeah the grammar and spelling is being fixed, I’m surprised how much I didn’t notice lmao. Though I would really like your opinion on the pacing, as I felt personally it went too fast and need more inbetween stuff, at least in baes and Victoria’s Routes (Though the stories may be completely different down the line ). But any advice you have is good too, all feed back is appreciated :). I’d prefer other social media as not to clog up the comments though.

 And thank you for playing!

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Twitter works the  best, it’s at llonelly2 :)

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This game was just uploaded 4 hours ago and this is the first time I've went back online in this website XD the coincidence is surreal...

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Hey! I'm playing through this right now and am really enjoying it. I've actually wanted a monster themed yuri game for some time, so I really appreciate this.

I saw you mention that some character routes were unfinished and the choices were really strict because they are supposed to be played last. If you don't mind answering, what is the intended order to play through the routes?

I've also noticed a lot of grammatical and spelling related errors. I mean no offense, but it can often make reading through the dialogue a bit confusing at times. I understand this is still a work in progress, but if you need someone to help write dialogue in a more cohesive way, I'd be willing to help if that's possible.

I think this could turn out to be a really good read once it's more fleshed out and finished. Also, I don't know if this is intentional because it's a monster themed game, but I keep seeing "Witch" instead of "which", Witch bugs me sometimes lmao.

It also says it's been updated to 2.0, but when I download it I still get the 1.0 version. Not sure what's going on with that, maybe I'm just downloading it too early and I need to give time for the file to upload?

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the intended way is Lyell, bae, vic, xanthes and liens.  the first three  don't matter as much but might be confusing in certain parts , but liens must be last . this is also due to the violence and horror aspects increasing in each route so it eases you in.

And yes I'm very bad at English in general such as spelling and grammar. my brain just doesn't see the mistakes like others do so it makes it hard to proof read for me. it takes me a couple rereads of a line before I even notice a mistake.  I'm much better at general comics with little dialogue but I wanted to branch out and learn.So yes, your help would be very appreciated(And I'll credit you for helping and such if you want). And I hate witch and which so much cause I do mess them up a lot :'). but thank you for the feedback! and I'm really glad you're enjoying it! sorry for my grammar mistakes.

Also renpy when compiling the game defaults the version to 1.0 no matter how many times you built it before.  But on itch if the file name is different it doesn't replace the old ones. And if you delete the old files  instead of replacing then they lose the stats that are on them. So you have the newest verison its just the file name that is the same. Its weird and i don't like it :').  Unless your not seeing the changes I mentioned in the description?

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No problem! I figured English may not have been your first language, and that's totally cool. I'm well versed in English and I'd love to help in any way if I can, so just let me know what I can do for you and how I can get in contact with you outside this comment section. I wanna see this succeed! Don't worry about your mistakes, they will only help you to improve.

I saw it don't worry. And English is my first language I'm just really bad at it, grammar and spelling just never stuck with me like other people sadly(every semi colon you see in the game is just a wild guess as if its right or not.) I have two tumblrs(One in the description of game and the one on my creator page), a twitter and a discord . just tell which one you prefer.

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That's cool too :) I struggled with it as well a bit but I'm pretty good on that front now. I thought when you said you were bad at English it was because it wasn't your first language, my mistake.

Anyways, Twitter works for me since I don't really use discord a lot.

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thats cool no worries. my twitter is @llonelly2  just message whenever :)

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I enjoyed this a lot more than I thought I would! I expected it to be quite short, but It was actually kind of long. I played through Lyell's route, and I really liked it!

The main errors I found (as of version 1.0) were that when Cecil was first introduce, Hazell shows up, but her sprite doesn't appear. And the other one I found was that in the first fight with Cecil, I think the instinct and reason choices are mixed up. You stay out of the fight when you pick instinct, and try to help Lyell against her wishes with reason. btw instinct is misspelled in both the fight scene, (And maybe others as well) it shows up as "instict".

I found a few logical errors too, when Lyell goes to Jamie to do... something... it's never actually stated what she needed to do there. Considering the conversation, it probably had to do with Cecil, but I don't think it's ever actually said. If it was I missed it. I also had a hard time figuring out how close Lyell and Jaylene were before the game. In the beginning nothing is ever stated that Jaylene knew Lyell from anywhere other than the dinner, but later Jaylene say's she's known Lyell for years. And even later, also says she knows nothing about her? I think I kinda get what you were trying to say, but it feels a little conflicting.

Over all, I really loved the game! and I'm really curious to play down Xanthe's route once that's finished!

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Thank you so much for playing! And yes I may need to fix that when making a game like this you kinda forget some things you already stated before so thank you for pointing that out. I meant it as Jaylene knew Lyell in high school but since there 4 years apart they barley talked to each other  and now just see each other at the diner (or dinner? idk). But thank you for pointing that out so I can make that more clear in newer versions :) . 

And when they went to jamies i purposefully left it mysterious but i can see why that would be confusing so in later version i might add why she went there since it does explain werewolf culture more.  And thank you for pointing out misspellings and the graphic issues, playing through it myself it makes it hard to notice those.

also you can play xanthes route right now but its half finished (It would have been finished if a file corruption didn't happen but oh well :') )with loads of errors. The choices you have at the start decided which route you take. for the others you just need to get 4 or more right. but for xanthes and Liens you have to get all the questions right.  this is due to the fact their supposed to be the last ones you play. 

But thank you so much for the feedback! this is really helpful and i appreciate you taking the time to play and leave a comment. This helps a ton.

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No problem! (Also you're right, it is diner, I misspelled XD)

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Interested in seeing where this goes. Especially for the vampire Yuri route when you finish that!

The main errors I found with Demo 1.0 were grammar or spelling related and sometimes the names didn't appear over the text right. Either the wrong person was speaking or didn't have a name attached to it at all. Not sure if I could efficiently point out every single time those two errors occurred but those were the main things I noticed.

Good luck with this! :)

Thank you for the feedback!  and thank you for having interest  :) (the vampire route is going to be Xanthes :) )

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